“Why I said what I said to Howard and Dionny."

“Why I said what i said to Howard and Dionny"

When i first began reading the articles i had no idea what they were writing about, but that's what made it interesting. Once i put the pieces together and figured out the assignment i was able to express some of my concerns. Having no personal connection or idea of the individual gave me a sense of freedom to respond both honestly and critically. For Howard, i felt the add he chose was a strong one, and executed his assignment well but could of defiantly took it further then just the basic descriptions and has potential. Use more literary devices, and methods of communicating your ideas better.
For Dionny, i felt the add you chose was slightly more difficult, but same can be said to you that i said to Howard. And to both of you, if you feel stuck take a step back and try to change your point of view, experiment more with your words and ideas and I'm sure you will be able to come up with some great descriptions.
I don't usually critique anyone's work , but i did learn how to analyze written work and look for certain things that stand out , both negative and positive.